<p>Okay, please review this for content and structure. Do not waste your time checking for grammar. (You can comment on word choice, but don’t worry about specific instances… just in general) I think my essay is pretty good, but I want to be sure it is structurally and content-ally sound before I begin to edit it sentence-by-sentence.</p>
<p>You must be class of 2008 or before to read this. Also, you must have 100 post count or higher. Please leave your email unless you would like it PMed. If you are willing to do this, I would like a fair amount of comments (more than a couple sentences).</p>
<p>Don’t be nice, (constructive) criticism is very welcome. Though, remember that this is the first college essay I’ve written, so be tolerant, but still add comments.</p>
<p>Note: This will be going to Stanford, Georgetown, Duke, Vanderbilt, and a few scholarships so it MUST be top-of-the-line.</p>
<p>THANK YOU!!</p>