<p>Hi can you guys please tell me where to make improvements in my application, I am still a Junior and feel there is still time for me to improve. I live in Dubai,UAE where it is hard to get work experience as most companies opt for the cheap labor provided by immigrants here. There is also a lack of extra-curriculars in my school, will the university take this into account.
I am Indian/Indonesian</p>
<p>British System : 4 A* 3 A 3 B
Overall Grade : A
SAT :2060(1st Try plan to retake it again aiming for 2200+)
ECs:
- Running a small Playstation repair business
- Coordinating a special needs programs between the company and my school
- Participating in said program which I am President of.
- Teaching Guitar to students in my school
- Taking guitar lessons
- Partaking in timed hikes of 4-6 days which I have recieved the Gold level
- Coordinating a charity fair’s entertainment which raised over $15,000
- Weekly religious studies
- Coordinating an entire orchestra and composing original pieces with them.
- Teaching french to students in school as well as out of school
- Work Experience at an Insurance Brokerage firm 150+ hours
- Work experience with a large cooperate company in Nigeria 200 + hours
- Rugby team in various schools for 6+ years
- Guided tours around my school</p>
<p>I also want to know whether i should include this on my application.
I used to have an eating disorder when I was 15, which got way out of hand. I have now conquered said disorder on my own and am now working my way towards a perfect body. I don’t want into get into major details on this forum cause it is personal. But can I include said achievement in my application because i am proud of what i did and it was a large thing for me to conquer .</p>
<p>Where should I make improvements on my application, i would like to know before hand so that I can have the best application possible for when I apply. And where would be the ideal places for me to apply</p>