In need of critique on my main essay about feminism

College Essays
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<p>Applying to Scripps tonight… in need of readers! Thanks!</p>

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<p>PM me, (I have already sendt it, so don’t worry about my low post count)</p>

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<p>I PMed you!</p>

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<p>Haven’t yet received feedback. Is anyone else available?</p>

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<p>Have you received my PM already?
If no, I will write another one.</p>