<p>Supplemental essay for a mystery college you will soon learn of if you are kind enough to volunteer to read it. Oooh, sounds intriguing, does it not? 
Anyway, not really sure how good it is. I’m a little worried I was a little to informal in places, but I’m hoping that differentiates me from the thousands of others applying. So, any takers willing to read to read my essay?</p>
<p>sure, send it over</p>
<p>i dont mind reading it and possibly even suggesting some changes</p>
<p>Thanks guys! I’ll PM it over right now.</p>
<p>send it. can u read mine too?</p>
<p>Yep, just PMed you.</p>