<p>Would anyone here be willing to read/comment on/critique my response to this prompt? My first choice is Yale, so I thought it appropriate to post here rather than elsewhere. Also, this was written on one of my few ECs, so it’s really important that it convey well the nature of the EC and how it’s affected me.</p>
<p>As a disclaimer, I wasn’t really sure what they were asking for with this prompt.</p>
<p>Any help you can give would be great. Thanks.</p>
<p>I’d love to help you. The activity is as important as your personal essay. PM me.</p>
<p>Sure. 
PM me!</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>i’ll read it too!</p>
<p>I’ll read it. =D</p>
<p>anyone care to read mine??
(starting a whole new thread seemed pointless…)</p>
<p>I’ll read both, anarchist and hookem. PM them. :)</p>
<p>i’ll read them.</p>
<p>parent here – I’ll read them. PM me.</p>
<p>i’ll read both =O pm me</p>
<p>I’ll read 'em.</p>
<p>I’ll read both</p>
<p>would anyone like to read my essay?
ill pm it to you.
but only to people not applying this year.no offense.
and please don’t post it after you’ve finished reading it!</p>
<p>sure, PM me! :)</p>
<p>anyone can PM me and i’ll read it</p>
<p>Sure! I’ll show it to my best friend’s bro, he’s currently at Yale :)</p>
<p>I’ll read both. PM</p>
<p>I’ll read both if you’d like. But to jojogunx - I AM a rising senior, so if you don’t feel comfortable, that’s fine too. If you DO decide to send it however, I guarantee a critical review ; ) </p>
<p>(I’ve written my essays already - actually four common apps, 3 activities and 3 supplements - so I most definitely won’t “copy” or whatever…heheh. I can send you guys mine if you want to see my writing to see if you want my opinions too :D)</p>
<p>Michael Fruth, aren’t you going into 9th grade? I think the OP specifically wanted current YALE students (emphasis on Yale…and current…). I get you are trying to be a step ahead for college and everything, but I don’t think reading applicants’ essays is the way to go about doing that.</p>