<p>Rewant check your inbox, I decided to help you out a bit in showing you a sample of what I write on a daily basis. Sophistication is great, but the fact is that your writing is just not up there and by no means should you try to pursue a vocabulary that will take more than memorization to really understand its true meaning. Words are like ingredients in a dish. If you use the basic ingredients intelligently, you will more than impress the admissions committee. In fact, if you’ve ever tried cooking an indian dish the hard way, more than likely, it could end up tasting the same if you had used fewer and smarter ingredients instead. Remember this analogy as you read what I have sent, and you will see that you don’t need to be a walking dictionary that always feels the urge to use uncommon words to sway ppl’s minds. Have you not read Shakespeare? Rather than using new words, he often creates wonderful metaphors by arranging simple vocabulary in various orders. ;)</p>