Intellectual Vitality Essay (Not looking for readers)!

Colleges & Universities Stanford University
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<p>Okay, so, as the title says, I’m looking not looking for ppl to read my essay. Rather, I’m looking for suggestions. </p>

<p>I’ve written it on one of my math classes with a math teacher who was 67 at the time and taught his last year with my class. He was kind of a crap teacher (though I don’t explicitly say this/blame him in the essay), but I talk about one day when he told us why he chose a career in mathematics, science, etc.</p>

<p>Does this sound like an interesting topic? I later explain how his “speech” sparked my interest in engineering and, eventually, Biomechanical Engineering, which I’d like to study at Stanford.</p>

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<p>If you’re passionate about this and if it’s really important to you, go ahead. From what I’ve heard, you’re free to write about pretty much everything.</p>

<p>Sorry if my explanation was a little too ambiguous … but that’s college admissions. We have no idea what Stanford is looking for other than “passion”</p>