<p>I’m taking a sorta weird approach to this topic and just want to make sure it’s still answering the prompt. I know it’s super close to the deadline, but a quick read would be much appreciated 
Thanks to Sci-Fry I realized posting my essay was a bad idea…so tell me if you’re interested in reading and I’ll PM you It’s a contemplative essay meshing science and philosophy together…</p>
<p>One warning: It’s probably not a great idea to put this online as there are very dishonest people out there who will steal your essay.</p>
<p>I’m applying this year as well, but I must say I really enjoyed the essay. The intro was very different from what I expect to be the norm. You have a very relaxed writing style, which I like. However, I’m not entirely sure about the "you"s in the last paragraph. </p>
<p>Good luck!</p>
<p>Thanks! ^_^</p>
<p>I was thinking of wrting about time travel, the universe at first, but I figured that many many ppl would write about that… in the end I chose to write about whether homosexuality is innate or a choice, and how people can be so discriminative when homosexuals have done nothing wrong against them, from my perspective as a homosexual. what do u all think?</p>