Interested Essay Editors?

College Essays
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<p>I have a few drafts of my “why transfer” essay but I think they all suck so far. I haven’t really nailed it yet, not at all. My thoughts are very scattered. I am having trouble presenting my ideas NOT in metaphors. Some metaphors are good, but right now it’s pretty much all metaphorical and not clear. </p>

<p>Would anyone read a version of it and give me some tips on how to: organize my ideas better, be clearer and less poetic? </p>

<p>Much appreciated.</p>

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<p>I’ll try; send it through a PM.</p>

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<p>I’ll help if you want a second opinion.</p>

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<p>I’ll be sure to give you a few tips. =]</p>