<p>Hello everyone!
I’m a student from Brazil.applying to UCSB mainly;
Is anyone interested in reading my essay and giving me some advices/critics?
If so, I’ll pm you
Thanks!</p>
<p>“Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?”</p>