its smack dab in the middle of the range but most of the essays ive read approach 600+ words
is it bad that i feel that extending this essay would just sound like unnecessary rambling on a topic that could be more concise?
could someone read my essay please?
If you feel that you’ve gotten across what you wanna get across, then it’s great!
I’m a senior who just submitted all my apps today, so I’d be happy to review your essay if you’d like
I can take a look at it if you want.
i appreciate the help i really do! but maybe it would be a bit more prudent for me to have someone elder read it?
Perhaps “more mature” would be better than “elder.”
As an almost 60-year-old, I’d be happy to take a look. Is that “elderly” enough?