Is anybody willing to read the intro paragraph to my WHAP essay?

<p>The prompt: Analyze the social and economic transformations that occurred in the Atlantic world as a result of new contacts among Western Europe, Africa, and the Americas from 1492 to 1750.</p>

<p>I'll PM it to you... I have a feeling that my teacher lurks around this website.</p>

<p>It's my very first essay for WHAP (I know, my school has fallen behind), and I'm not sure if I'm doing it right or not.</p>

<p>Oh, and it's a change and continuity over time essay.</p>

<p>**** If you do happen to read it, please feel free to pick it apart as much as you can. I really do need all the help I can get. Thanks :)</p>

<p>Bump - I am so desperate.</p>

<p>I'll read it! :) Why not help someone if I'm as bored as I am lol</p>

<p>I would be happy to.</p>

<p>I'd be happy to.</p>

<p>i will read it</p>

<p>pm me the essay. I'll give you my feedback....</p>