<p>Im applying to ivy league schools but my essay isnt that great. I know some of you might say that as long as i have good scores, grades, ec, community service, and all the other things one not so good essay wont matter. I really need my essay to grab their attention into accepting me!!! SO PLEASE IF YOU CAN… READ MY ESSAY AND GIVE ME REMARKS AS TO HOW I CAN REALLY IMPROVE IT!</p>
<p>PM me your essay if you feel like it, I’m not applying to Yale, and I’ve sent in my apps.</p>
<p>ill read it!</p>
<p>I applied through Questbridge and I am fairly skilled in the language of rhetoric. You can PM it and I’ll make any grammatical corrections or problems with flow. Piece of advice: don’t worry so much. The wait will kill you.</p>