Is my Essay on the right track?

College Essays
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<p>Can someone read my essay and see what they think? </p>

<p>I’ll private message you it if you want to.</p>

<p>Also I am apply for UW-Milwaukee and talking about how 2 or 3 of my favorite teachers impacted me. Should I also add the 1 bad teacher’s experience that also made me want to be a teacher, I learned a lot from her of what I don’t want to be like.</p>

<p>Thanks everyone!</p>

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<p>Go ahead and send me your essay! </p>

<p>It would be a great idea to talk about that 1 bad teacher, but if there is a word limit, maybe just 1 bad teacher and 1 teacher that REALLY impacted you where you can write a lot about him/her.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it…:D</p>

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<p>I’ll critique your essay if you critique mine</p>

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<p>Thanks! I’m new so can you PM me an Email or something to send my essay?</p>