Is my essay risky?

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<p>Hello Parents,
I figured I would post this here due to the fact that you have already graduated college. Ok, so I don’t know if my essay is risky. My essay is formated in terms of train stops. At each stop my maturity grows until I finally reach manhood. I’m worried, however, that the reader of my essay might not understand what riding the train is like. I have to take the train everyday to school for an hour each day. If someone hasn’t ever taken the train I’m not sure they’ll grasp the concept of my essay.</p>

<p>If anyone here would be willing to read it, I would be more than grateful. </p>

<p>Thank you,
UVA</p>

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<p>You can PM it to me. I like the sound of it, if you can make it work. Include your email address as I may want to respond by making comments in a Word document.</p>

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<p>I think most people know how a train works.</p>

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<p>Is it a Maglev train? That would make all the difference.</p>

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<p>All the Adcomm readers will know what it is like to ride a train. They will get it. Don’t worry.</p>

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<p>Sent to all who have asked.</p>