Is my Essay too complicated?

College Essays
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<p>Will someone please read my Common App essay? I really liked it, but now looking back, I feel like I may have over done it. I will email you or message you!</p>

2

<p>You can send it to me if you want.</p>

3

<p>I would love to read it.</p>

4

<p>PM me if would …</p>

5

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

6

<p>Message me; I’d love to read it</p>

7

<p>You can message me if you like. DW, done with my application.</p>

8

<p>PM me. Done with my apps as well.</p>