Is my essay too generic? Proof-readers please!

College Essays
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<p>I wrote my Common App essay on my experience at work, and I’m scared it might be too bland and trite. I also need some help with editing overall as I have no one in my life who is really good at it. Any help I can get would be appreciated! Post below if you can help me out and I’ll PM you (and be your friend forever!).</p>

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<p>I’ll help with grammar.</p>

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<p>I’ll try to help</p>

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<p>I’ll give it a try!</p>

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<p>Ys i m ready to help. Upload it.
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<p>Facing the same dilemma; send it over</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. :)</p>

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<p>sure send it over mate</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>