Is there anyboy willing to edit and critize the examples I wrote for SAT essays?

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<p>Is anyboy here willing to edit and critize the examples I wrote for SAT essays?</p>

<p>I wrote several examples, which I might directly or indirectly use in SAT essays, and I need the advice from others,in terms of language use, logic,etc</p>

<p>If you are willing to help me, plz send email to me <a href="mailto:iverson926■■■■■■■■■■■■">iverson926■■■■■■■■■■■■</a></p>

<pre><code> thanks very much
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<p>Why the gender discrimination!!! :D</p>

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<p>anybody??~~~~~~~</p>

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<p>You can pm them to me if you like.</p>

<p>I’ve commented on essays other people have posted in this forum, so check my past posts to see whether I’m the sort of commenter you want.</p>