Is this a good Common App essay, or should I start over?

College Essays
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<p>Hi! I just completed my 1st rough (really rough) draft for the Common App essay. I’m not sure if its a bad topic and I should write a new one, or keep it and continue with editing. </p>

<p>I’m applying to Wash U, Northwestern, Kenyon, Depauw, Purdue, and IU. Would anyone like to take a look at it/ edit the crap out of it? </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>I’ll have a look at your rough draft.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read</p>

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<p>I wouldnt mind taking a look at it for you.</p>

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<p>Ill take a look</p>

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<p>Send it over!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Ill look at it</p>

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<p>can i read it??</p>

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<p>sure ill read</p>

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<p>Ill take a took</p>

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<p>Thank you all! I appreciate your helpfulness. :D</p>