<p>(I’m a junior still) but anyways…
I was thinking about writing my essay about my passion for working with young children and my reasons for it? and also include the experience i have workng with children(day camp, tutoring, kumon, etc)
I want to major in childhood education.
Do you think that this is a good topic for my essay?
any suggestions on how to take a more interesting approach to writing an essay on this topic?
thank you!</p>
<p>Sure, that sounds reasonable. :)</p>
<p>Don’t use the essay to give a lot of details about your job experience. Your readers can find that elsewhere in your application.</p>
<p>Use the essay to reveal you. Be personal, detailed, honest, revealing.</p>
<p>Here’s some good advice about writing college essays:</p>
<p>[Essays</a>, Admission Information, Undergraduate Admission, U.Va.](<a href=“http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html]Essays”>http://www.virginia.edu/undergradadmission/writingtheessay.html)</p>
<p>And show, don’t tell:</p>
<p>[Show</a>, don’t tell](<a href=“http://users.wirefire.com/tritt/tip1.html]Show”>http://users.wirefire.com/tritt/tip1.html)</p>