Is this a ridiculously risky opening to my essay?

<p>Can I pm anyone the first 130-ish words? </p>

<p>I was told to be completely honest…and the honest truth is that I never even considered Northwestern until after the end of my junior year when my guidance counselor (who is also a family friend) sort of pushed me to visit. And when I did, I liked it a lot. So this is sort of an opening to the “What specific qualities about the school…?” essay. </p>

<p>If anyone would like to read, I will PM it. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>sure10char</p>

<p>sure, i’ll read it</p>

<p>i’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>