is this rude/weird to say for why this college essay?

<p>I’m writing why this college essay and in my paragraph
im talking about how i had an opportunity to talk to the dean during open house
and how I was so moved by how nicely/thoroughly he answered my question
when i didn’t expect him to be b/c it was after the question session had ended </p>

<p>I want to say that that experience made me think about how amazing
the whole faculty must be under him and i was gonna throw in this asian proverb
that deals with how the person in highest position mirror the people lower </p>

<p>is this weird to say?</p>

<p>thanks:D</p>

<p>To me the Asian proverb sounds like trying a little too hard but other posters might have a better perspective.</p>