Is this sentence correct grammatically?

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<p>Students will gain hands-on experience, skills, and a sense of personal fulfillment with business.</p>

<p>anything wrong with the parallel structure?</p>

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<p>Hmm… I would say:</p>

<p>In business, students will gain … fulfillment.</p>

<p>And it should be: Is this sentence gramatically correct? ;)</p>

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<p>I agree with cowgirl…</p>

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<p>Maybe it’s just me, but “skills” sounds a bit awkward there. Trying describing what kind of skill, for instance: communication skills, interpersonal skills.</p>

<p>However, the sentence is grammatically correct.</p>

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<p>agree with sup, but would change “with business” to “with a business education” or something like that.</p>