<p>I have a draft. </p>
<p>I need 5 qualified, graduated, senior members to read it and rip it apart. </p>
<p>I’ll be using this essay most likely to apply to all ivies.</p>
<p>I need honest opinions, because I’m pretty sure nobody else would even WANT to write an essay about this person.</p>
<p>From an American standpoint, would this topic be a good idea?</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>