ive got two good essays and i need help

<p>well i got deferred from brown and it made me second guess the essay I had submitted to them. Now that im sending out RD apps I decided to write another essay. i like both essays but im looking for another opinion. If any of the parents could help me out I would really appreciate it. </p>

<p>just leave your email.</p>

<p>thanks again</p>

<p>send them to me by PM</p>

<p>any one else, i would really appreciate it</p>

<p>by the way thanks again marite.</p>

<p>I've looked at one of your essays and I liked it a lot. Anyway, if you want to send it to me again...</p>