<p>Hey guys. I chose the first topic on the CommonApp - the “significant experience” one, where I basically try to relate my adventure at an amusement park to slaying a dragon to show my creativity. It’s still a bit wonky, and I’d like some help.</p>
<p>I’m sorry, but I’d like to ask that no high school students graduating in '09 respond to this post. Just… being careful, y’know?</p>
<p>Any and all help is appreciated.</p>
<p>Hey guys, an update: I’ve actually decided to opt-out on the dragon, to make my essay more clear and down-to-earth. Also, since I didn’t get any responses last time, '09ers are free to take a look. I’m gonna send it in soon, so if it could use improvement, I really need to know.</p>
<p>Any and all help is appreciated!</p>
<p>i can take a look. but i’m applying this year</p>
<p>I can give a look if u dun mind, I am a transfer student.</p>
<p>Sent! Thanks for the help.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look, I’m a freshman in college if it makes you feel any better.</p>
<p>Bump. I want to get a few more opinions before I send it off.</p>
<p>fine i’ll do it, pm yeah?</p>
<p>i can take a look at it and return feedback (pm).</p>
<p>Don’t try to force your creativity. It won’t come off so positively. :P</p>
<p>I’m an '09er, but I just got my ED acceptance, so I promise I won’t steal anything. I’d love to read it. Send by pm?</p>
<p>Sure! I’de promise you the best review on your Essay. I am an asian and when it comes to Dragins…I sure know I can help you out!</p>
<p>Sure! I’de promise you the best review on your Essay. I am an asian and when it comes to Dragins…I sure know I can help you out!</p>
<p>hi, either pm it to me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>(but do it soon, i have vacation plans in 4 days)</p>
<p>i’m not an 09-er</p>
<p>Thanks, guys! Though I appreciate all of the enthusiasm, I think I’ve requested the help of enough people now.</p>
<p>Send it over!</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it
pm me</p>
<p>If it’s not too late,I’d like to read yours.
But it’s late for me, I’ve already mailed out everything yesterday</p>