The essay has a 500 word limit, which is significantly longer than most of my Why college X essays. Since JHU doesn’t require any other essays, I spent a lot of time talking about myself. Maybe it’s a bit of a cliche, but I described my room and linked my academic interests to items in the room. Could somebody critique it? I’d prefer somebody who applied to JHU before.
Can I bump this? Or is that frowned upon?