Johns Hopkins/Columbia/Dartmouth/Cornell essay DONE!

College Essays
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<p>My starting lines:</p>

<p>I discovered myself after the epiphanic moment not long ago when that chilling realization had sliced through my soul: I was a woman; I was not to be heard.</p>

<p>My conclusion:</p>

<p>My favorite T-shirt, an ordinary design with an extraordinary message, flashes through its girlish pink hues my empowerment as a woman. The delicate white letters on it powerfully scream my pride, my passion, my strength, and my identity: “I am a woman; hear me ROAR!” Today, this is MY truth – absolute and invincible. </p>

<p>What do you think?</p>

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<p>Cmon - anyone?</p>

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<p>hear me roar?</p>

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<p>Its a common feminist slogan</p>

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<p>ah. feminism is pretty legit. i used to be obsessed with foucault. although he’s definitely not everyone’s taste</p>

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<p>If it makes sense - I moved to NYC from Saudi Arabia in March 2006. So feminism is a big part of my life.</p>

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<p>24 people viewed it! You could leave something couldn’t you?</p>

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<p>the imagery at the end is very strong. as long as everything in the middle flows your essay will probably be very good and should leave a lasting impression of your character</p>