June Essay- Estimate my mark?

<p>I got the question about whether people should follow the opinions of others or be independent. </p>

<p>I had wrote 2 full pages. 4 paras. 1 Intro, 2 body, 1 conclude. </p>

<p>The words I used were relatively pompous. </p>

<p>For my body #1, I wrote about how Galileo opposed the Catholic church’s veiw of how the earth was at the center of the universe. That his opinions had help sprout generations of inquisitive scientists, etc etc. </p>

<p>For body #2, I discussed Jonathan Swift’s “Modest Proposal” and how he defied english aristocratic rule, etc etc. </p>

<p>My concluding para basically paraphrased my intro, talking about how numerous character from Lit and Hist have defied the social tide. </p>

<p>About what score do you guys think I would recieve? I know its hard to judge, but aproximate please.</p>

<p>well based purely on ur structure i think its gonna be 10-12…</p>

<p>i’d give it a 9 or a 10. :)</p>