<p>I just cant seem to be able to get my intro paragraph right for the Common App… I just need to know if it flows well and makes grammatical sense… </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I’m hoping one of the more experience “readers” will come along to help you, but if they don’t you can send it to me and I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>Thanks, just sent a PM</p>
<p>I sent you a PM this morning, but your box was full.</p>
<p>(If that was addressed to me)…</p>
<p>Sorry, I deleted some things now…</p>