I planned to submit my UC app tonight, but upon rereading my first essay I thought it seemed painfully boring. Would anyone care to take a look and make some edits?
I could if you want 
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If it seems boring to you, it’s probably too late to make any major changes. You can PM me, but I’m better at grammar than pizzazz.
pm me
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It’s due today. Hit “submit.”
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sure i can read for you, i have already submitted mine