Last ditch effort please read my common app essay

<p>if you want to critique my essay and be as mean as possible, comment below. I am looking for straightforward people that can be mean if they have to. It’s for my own good</p>

<p>I don’t need to be mean, but I CAN critique your essay. PM me with your draft.</p>

<p>I can help if you’d like. PM me :)</p>

<p>I want to help!</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you PM it to me and also tell me where ShakeMeDown comes from?</p>

<p>Sure thing buddy. I’ll read it</p>