<p>I chose the first topic and wrote about my sleep paralysis. If anyone would be willing to read through it and proofread or comment, it would be highly appreciated. I’ll PM it to you.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>Thank you very much, I sent it.</p>
<p>I’d also be willing to trade for the other procrastinators out there.</p>
<p>^Ok, ill take you up on that offer. PM me over your essay and i’ll PM you back mine. Mainly, i’m my feedback is gonna be on content and what I thought of it.</p>
<p>Sent. I’ll do the same and comb through for any grammar errors or if I can find anywhere it could sound smoother.</p>
<p>Bump. I’ve been tweaking it here and there over the last 24 hours. Any more critiques would be great. I’ll swap if need be.</p>