last minute decision to write a new common app essay- input wanted

[somedumbnoob]

<p>Would anyone like to comment on it?</p>

[jjchase24]

<p>ill help you
pm it</p>

[somedumbnoob]

<p>sent. thanks</p>

[LaLaLa12345]

<p>Sure Pm me if you want one more</p>

[somedumbnoob]

<p>Thanks. Done</p>

[vadox6466]

<p>ill take a look</p>

[somedumbnoob]

<p>Thank you, done</p>

[johr]

<p>I’ll take a look if you want another opinion.</p>

[monkeyjoint]

<p>I’ll read as well.</p>