Last minute essay review - applying to Ivies

I would like to pm you my essay and receive some feedback on grammar and ideas. I am really second-guessing myself. Thank you in advance!


Please help

I’m a parent. If you want to send me the draft today, I’ll provide some feedback. Am currently a passenger in a long car ride so have some time!

Thank you so much! I don’t see the option to message you. Could you send me a message first?

Messaged you.