<p>do you think this is too long? should i break it down ?
i thought it was ok though.</p>
<p>As I think of the unforgettable surgeries and hardships, I also reflect upon my own achievement, how far I have come as a tennis player, and of course how far I still have to go, not only in tennis, but also in the game of life.</p>
<p>Well, it depends on what you are trying to express</p>
<p>one would have to read the whole essay to figure out if it’s long because if it flows good through the paragraphs then its good</p>
<p>but after readign it alone, i think its long</p>
<p>i think it’s “ok” but i think you should shorten it.</p>
<p>Well, it’s not horrible, but it’s kind of long and it’s not that hard to shorten it or make it two sentences instead.</p>
<p>i think its fine
it states your strong bottomline
the thing is that i like long sentences and it hasn’t ever harmed me</p>
<p>a long sentence never hurt anyone</p>