Less-than-stellar Common App essay

<p>I was under a lot of pressure while writing my Common App essay (worst case of writer’s block I’ve ever had), and I don’t feel that the piece I eventually ended up submitting accurately represents my writing abilities. That said, I think all of my supplements are very strong. Would anyone be willing to look over my essay and see if they think it’s bad enough to kill my chances? The schools I’m worried about in question are Harvey Mudd, Carnegie Mellon (SCS), and Northwestern. My stats are strong, and my recs are probably great, but I won’t get into those since I’m not asking to be chanced here. Anyway, let me know if I can PM my essay to you. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Maybe I could help you make it stellar? Haha do PM it!</p>

<p>I would very much like to revise it! PM me please!</p>

<p>I’d like to proofread it – PM me please!</p>