<p>kay, so common app essay due in about eight hours.
I would really appreciate any feed back at all.
It’s fairly short - less than 500 words</p>
<p>here ya go!</p>
<p>[UGHHH</a>. Need help finishing and editing Common App Essay. <500 words!](<a href=“http://www.essayforum.com/undergraduate-admission-essays-2/ughhh-need-help-finishing-editing-common-app-essay-words-9803/]UGHHH”>'Immigrant to the United States'; I did my best to avoid alienating from my American peers)</p>