<p>So, after reading all these great essays, I ask myself,“How the eff, is my essay going to compete with these guys? They’re insanely good”. So, I was thinking of using my pediatrician as an inspiration to my dream of well… becoming a pediatrician. Is it wise to start the essay with like a story of a regular check up of me when I was a child? Like “this little boy was scared yada yada yada and little did he know that in the future he would dream to become the most the he feared most” something like that.</p>
<p>Anecdotes are a nice way to start, hopefully not a cliched one though</p>
<p>you want to read my intro to see if it’s cliched before i continue? lmao</p>
<p>itsvu tis me again. dont scrap your essay, just add and revise until it feels right. just like in painting you just go layer over layer</p>
<p>lol, well i’m saving just in case but i really think i should rewrite because i really kind of jump around alot. so yeeeah… i might use the pediatrician paragraph in there though lol</p>