<p>My son has written an essay about his philosophical views of the world and how he wants to make a difference. He is a deep thinker and does care about world events. I am concerned that the Admiss. Couns. may view his essay as soap boxing or of being disingenuous. Any thoughts on this type of essay?</p>
<p>The general view is that this type of essay is one of the most difficult choices. The reasons cited range from a perceived lack of originality of the subject to openly questioning how an eighteen year old could amaze the adcoms with well-formed opinions. </p>
<p>I think that essays which deal with personal matters are better choices. A platform of 500 words is quite small to discuss the state of the world. Since the college application essay offers the writer the chance to present his personal facets, I would recommend to seize that opportunity. </p>
<p>On the other hand, if the application contains other elements of deep thinking or creativity, the complementary of such an essay could make sense. It is doable but difficult.</p>