Long common app essay. Help

<p>If anyone wants to read my essay let me now. I will private message it to you.</p>

<p>I have about 650 words and need to get it down to 500. I still feel like I need to expand at the end also...I kind of have a writer's block. I'm going for the "other" essay....do you think my essay is alright for this? I hate writing</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>If you still need it, I'd be glad to help. PM me for my email (don't paste your essay in the message).</p>