Long essay. read please?

Colleges & Universities Massachusetts Institute of Technology
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<p>hey i just finished my long essay for MIT. Anyone care to read it? Proofreading would be nice, but I just want to see if it answers the question well enough and if it flows and tells enough about me. Basically if it is a good essay or not…
So someone please read it?
Tell me and I’ll PM it to you.</p>

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<p>AIM me. I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>i’ll give it a go</p>

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<p>I will read it</p>

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<p>I’ll do it too.</p>

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<p>Are you going to do like we discussed? If so, show these people version 2.0 :)</p>

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<p>I would! :)</p>

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<p>me me me!!</p>

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<p>lol I ll check out the “version 2.0”</p>

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<p>Wow strong similar name.</p>