Look at My 150-Word Essay? [No 2014-ers please]

College Essays
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<p>Just want some feedback on my first draft…</p>

2

<p>sure. I will read and edit it.</p>

3

<p>Sorry athlete…you’re a 2014-er. Nothing personal :)</p>

4

<p>Oh, by 2014 I mean the college graduation date. So I’m looking for people who have already finished their college applications.</p>

5

<p>PM over mate</p>

6

<p>Send it over; I’ll be more than happy to read it.</p>

7

<p>PM me if you wish.</p>

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<p>PM me if you wish. might be able to give u specific advice on style.</p>

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<p>Erm, fyi, the style was great. =)</p>