Looking for a parent's insight on UChicago essay

<p>I would really appreciate anyone on the Parent Cafe forum to read my UChicago essay (possibly anyone whose son/daughter attends the University). Thank you very much!!</p>

<p>Oops, I guess I didn’t really clarify why I chose this forum.
I’m kind of skeptical about making my parents read my college essays; I’d really appreciate it if any of you would.</p>