Looking for adults willing to help

<p>HI~
I’m not a parent.I’m just an applicant, but I want someone here to read my essays…People around me can’t read English, so seems that I’m really alone…
I want parents’ comments because the admission officers are also adults…maybe you are more likely to share the same point of view…
If you are willing to help me I cam pm you.</p>

<p>Thank you very very very much</p>