Looking for constructive criticism on my UC essays..

<p>Any takers? I would love to have some constructive criticism/feedback on my three UC essays. I'm trying to decide whether I should scrap them and start anew because I'm dissatisfied with them, so feedback would be GREAT!</p>

<p>P.S: If you give me feedback on my essays, of course I would love to return the favor to you to make it fair.</p>

<p>Thanks so much!</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind at all. Besides, I'm going to have mine proof read soon and I would want the same done for me. Just send them my way.</p>

<p>i'm willing to help. it'll be a good learning experience</p>

<p>I'm for it. Done tons of reading UC Essays, happy to help instead of doing UC Berkeley HW for a break.</p>

<p>i'm not familiar with the UC application but i'll take a look at them.</p>

<p>I can help proofread if you'd like. Just PM them to me.</p>

<p>I have to do them too but have only kinda completed one. PM please!</p>

<p>I'll have a look too. Please PM me.</p>

<p>Please PM me too</p>

<p>I'll look at them and maybe send you mine.</p>

<p>Sure. PM me if you feel like some real criticism.</p>

<p>Same, I've read a few of my friends essays and helped them out... I'd be glad to do the same for you. Just PM me.</p>

<p>I am pretty good with college essays. I'm an incoming frosh so no worries. PM me for a good critique.</p>


<p>a little late, but PM me if you'd like</p>

<p>pm me. willing to read.</p>

<p>pm me too.</p>

<p>and i'll pm you when I'm done with mine :D</p>