<p>I’m almost ready to send in applications to all my colleges, I’m just trying to make sure the final draft of my common application essay is sound. If anyone could give me feedback/suggestions I’d appreciate it. </p>
<p>PM me or just post here and I’ll send you my essay!</p>
<p>send it over, i’ll have a look and give some comments!</p>
<p>Yep I’ll look over it and give some feedback</p>
<p>I’d like to.</p>
<p>However, I believe you will encounter difficulty pm me. I just realize that “Private messaging is enabled only for members who have 15 or more posts.” Trying hard to create more posts and yet don’t compromise authenticity. I use love to have some critique on my common app essay too.</p>
<p>I guess you can email me at nicoleyang16@**********
Other people please don’t spam! Many thanks!</p>
<p>Sorry, i didn’t know it will turn out to be ***. I am new here too. Anyway, I am just going to BINGO by posting this. 
Then i’ll pm you my email address. If you would like to help me with mine, then please email back. Thanks. :)</p>