Looking for feedback on a not-so-ordinary college essay?

<p>I'm starting to get extremely numb to mine after having read it for way too may times, so another pair of eyes would be GREATLY appreciated! I'll be happy to give feedback on yours in return :)</p>

<p>Hey sure thing. Can you PM me your essay? In return, can you read mine please?</p>

<p>yeah sure PM it over</p>

<p>Yeah, I would love too! I'm getting tired of looking at mine, too...could you read over perhaps? :)</p>

<p>I would read it if you read mine :)</p>