Looking for readers for UC Prompt 1 Essay...no 2014ers, please :D

<p>It’s about the death of my stepfather, blahblahblah. Need some second opinions about length, development, etc. Thanks! ^_^</p>

<p>PM me. pronto!</p>

<p>Sorry, Lemon. I see you’re a 14’er, too…if at all possible, I’d like to avoid any possibility of plagiarism, not that you would :stuck_out_tongue: Just gotta be safe, you know?</p>

<p>OOOOOOOOOOOOH.</p>

<p>oops.</p>

<p>i thought u meant, class of 2014, from high school.</p>

<p>oops. I didn’t know you meant college seniors. :P</p>

<p>I know what you mean. I simply wanted to help…</p>

<p>critique mine though! (regardless of year).</p>