<p>Could anyone help me edit my essay?</p>
<p>It’s about user privacy and other loss of freedom that occur to us unknowingly. Much thanks in advance. Thank you very much for you time.</p>
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For those who need more info this is UC Berkeley essay contest regards to user privacy and loss of freedom. Sponsored by various companies in the Sillicon Valley. Any inputs will be appreciated.</p>